Dear Tim,
I am Jenny. I am 12 years old. Now it is my holiday. And now I have a lot of free time, so I now is writing a letter to get you.
My school is very good. There are many kind teachers and friendly stuends.Now I at school have many friends such as Mary and Tommy. But I know my best friend is you, Tom. In the school, there is a big library and a big gym. So sometimes I like going to the library to read some my interesting books.So now my Chinese and English are very good. And if we have a PT lesson, I will go to the gym. And I like playing sport.My favourite hobbies are reading books and playing sport.
Now, my holiady will end, so if you have some holidays you can go here and I will play with you.Oh, it time for me to sleep so I will give you say goodble.
See you soon,
Jenny.
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